Six Sentence Story: Walking Away

Lisa loved the carnival, especially the stall where you had to throw darts at the colourful balloons, and even though she wasn’t a very good shot, she always had fun giving it a try, but this time as she missed, she heard a snicker behind her.

Turing, she saw some of the girls and boys from her new school, pointing and sneering at her obviously awkward tries and felt herself turning red.

She turned to quickly finish the game, grabbing the dart and hurling it towards a balloon and jumped as there was a loud pop, which made her gain self-confidence and she threw once again and was elated at the two more pops and happily claimed her prize, feeling even more ecstatic as she noticed the sneers go soft and her haughty classmates scowling.

As Lisa cheerfully walked away, the man in charge of the dart game pocketed the extra money, hurriedly handed over by one of the boy’s in the group, who said that he’d pay him double if he made sure Lisa won the game.

Mike liked Lisa from the minute she joined school, as she was kind and real, unlike most of the other students in class but the fear of peer pressure stopped him making friends with her.

As Mike watched Lisa leave and heard the rude comments behind her back, he clenched his fists determinedly and marched after her, leaving his startled companions staring after him as he walked away.

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Author: Ugly Aphrodite (Available on Amazon Kindle) Ah, the need to get your thoughts out there! Happy reading folks!
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8 Responses to Six Sentence Story: Walking Away

  1. ivywalker says:

    Way to goMike!!!.😎

  2. Lyn says:

    I like Mike! He’s going to grow into a real man.

  3. mandibelle16 says:

    Aw, Mike’s a nice guy. So sweet of him to give the carnival game owner extra cash so the girl he likes could win. I’m glad he chases after at the end. Sounds like a good beginning.

  4. Mike is my kind of guy, he doesn’t let his friends do his thinking for him, and he appreciates the value of someone who is honest. What he did for her self-esteem was very kind. I hope they stick together!

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