Taken and ferociously loyal
Like ships that pass in the night, we met
Captivated by his caring heart, I moved on with an ache in mine.
Written for Three Line Tales
Advertisements
-
Top Posts & Pages
Recent Comments
swritings on FFfAW: No Life jacquelineobyikocha on FFfAW: No Life swritings on FFfAW: No Life michael1148humphris on FFfAW: No Life Priceless Joy on FFfAW: No Life
Advertisements
great take on the photo 🙂
Thank you! 🙂
Love the way you convey the sense of longing in these lines… Beautiful!
Frank
Thank you so much! I’m so glad you liked it! Thanks a lot for reading! 😊
Unrequited love – lovely lines
Thank you for reading! Glad you liked it! 😊
Thank you for writing and releasing your story to the world 😉
Loved your different perspective and take on the photo.
Thank you so much for reading! Glad you liked it! 😊
Ooh, excellent take on the prompt. So full of longing – great job 🙂
Thank you so much! Glad you liked it! 😊
Wonderful take on the prompt! This tugs on the heart strings 🙂
Thank you so much for your wonderful comment! Glad you liked it! 😊
That was lovely
Thank you so much for reading! Glad you liked it! 😊
Wonderful story in three sentences 🙂
Thank you so much! 😊
Pingback: Three Line Tales, Week 10: Round-Up | Only 100 Words
Lovely story. It’s been a long time since I heard the expression…”like ships that pass in the night.” 😊
It just seemed to go so well with the picture!😊 Thank you so much for reading!
the longing in between these lines is just so vivid. it makes my heart ache.
Aww.. may time heal all such hearts… 💕
amen! 🙂
Wow! You’re such a word Smith.
😊 Thank you for reading!
I never thought of “ships passing in the night”. Good take on it!
Thank you so much for reading! Glad you liked it! 🙂
Sad but lovely, Swritings. —– Suzanne
Thank you so much for reading! ☺