TLT: Not to be

Taken and ferociously loyal

Like ships that pass in the night, we met

Captivated by his caring heart, I moved on with an ache  in mine.

Written for Three Line Tales

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Author: Ugly Aphrodite (Available on Amazon Kindle) Ah, the need to get your thoughts out there! Happy reading folks!
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29 Responses to TLT: Not to be

  1. great take on the photo 🙂

  2. jansenphoto says:

    Love the way you convey the sense of longing in these lines… Beautiful!

    Frank

  3. bikurgurl says:

    Unrequited love – lovely lines

  4. pranabaxom says:

    Loved your different perspective and take on the photo.

  5. Sonya says:

    Ooh, excellent take on the prompt. So full of longing – great job 🙂

  6. Kay Morris says:

    Wonderful take on the prompt! This tugs on the heart strings 🙂

  7. mandibelle16 says:

    Wonderful story in three sentences 🙂

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  9. luckyjc007 says:

    Lovely story. It’s been a long time since I heard the expression…”like ships that pass in the night.” 😊

  10. rosemawrites says:

    the longing in between these lines is just so vivid. it makes my heart ache.

  11. gloverdeb says:

    Wow! You’re such a word Smith.

  12. I never thought of “ships passing in the night”. Good take on it!

  13. Sad but lovely, Swritings. —– Suzanne

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