The trial that had captivated half the town was nearing its conclusion. Abigail watched from her living room, while flipping through photos on her laptop.
The reporter was giving his analysis as to why Alcott Aldway would obviously be set free, as the murder weapon had never been found.
Abigail sighed as she glanced at the photo of Elsa and herself making duck faces outside the restaurant, no justice for poor Mrs. Bartley who had sat through weeks of hearing how her daughter had been cruelly hacked to death.
Suddenly her finger paused midair and she bent closer to the screen.
The juror was reading out the verdict.
“We find the defendant, not….”
“THE GYM…HE HID IT IN THE GYM!!”
All eyes turned in shock at Abigail who had burst into the courtroom screaming like a deranged banshee. She’driven in a far more crazed fashion, after having spotted Alcott’s face in the background of the photo, as he emerged from the old gymnasium.
Today, justice would be done, albeit not wholly by the system.
Written for: Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers
Love it how Abigail burst out screaming. I’m glad justice was served. Her poor friend deserved that and her friend’s Mom.
The system can be frustrating, but at least justice was done this time! Thanks for reading! 🙂
I love your spin to the prompt! I also love how she was able to get the justice that Alcott deserved! Great twist at the end. Loved it!
Aww, thank you so much! I had fun writing it! 🙂
I love to read the stories that the writer has fun writing, they are always so good! And yours was VERY good!
You have no idea how much your encouragement means! Thank you so much PJ!😊💕💞
You’re welcome! It’s true!
Oooh, just in time… Great take on the prompt!
Thank you so much!😊
What a thriller! Loved every bit of it. I have never tried writing crime thrillers… Yours is amazing!
Gosh! Thank you so much! It was fun writing it! You should give it a shot! I’m sure it’ll turn out great!😊
I will try for sure😀
That’s what you call ‘cutting it fine’! At least justice will now be done. Great story. 🙂
Thank you so much for reading! Glad you liked it! 🙂
Exciting story and well done! Fortunately she was paying close attention to details! 🙂
That was indeed very observant of her!😊 Thank you for reading! 😊
A very detailed story brilliantly accomplished.
Thank you so much for your kind words! I really appreciate it! 😊
Its a great story!!
Thank you! 😊
Wonderfully told and a great ending!
Thank you so much for your comment! I really appreciate it! 😊
A good thing he isn’t going to get away with it.
😊 Thank you for reading!