Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers
There were gasps of horror from below as he continued his perilous journey along the scaffolding. The ferocious gusts of wind a friend to no man, hindered his every step, but he resolutely moved on.
Cries of… stop….don’t do it…could be heard above the howling breeze but he paid no attention.
He was almost nearing the edge; this was it and for the first time he swallowed, hard. He’d simply called his wife and told her he’d be late and nothing from his tone made her suspect otherwise.
The shouts below were getting louder, it was now or never, he lunged forward and grabbed the mewing ball of fur, but not before he stumbled and clutched the metal bar above, steadying himself with a jerk. This was followed by simultaneous covering of mouths and exclamations of relief and pointing.
His climb down seemed to take longer than the one up but with his last step on solid ground he was greeted with hugs and applause, as he handed the scared kitten to its owner.
Wow, a big risk for a Kitten. Exciting story, I thought he’d jump initially .
Great twist to a happy ending – and what a lucky kitten!
Thank you so much for reading! Yes!A very lucky kitty indeed!😊
Awww … a kitty lover comes to the rescue. Super story … I enjoyed it very much.
Isadora 😎
Thank you so much for reading! I’m so glad you liked it!😊
Wonderful! I love that he took such a risk to save a little kitten. Great story telling! Loved it!
Kittens, puppies..I love ’em all!😊 … Thank you! Glad you liked it!☺
What a wonderful take with a surprise end! Great take. Kudos!
Thank you so much for reading! Glad you liked it😊
One down, eight lives left! A heartwarming tale.
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Thank you so much!😊
What a hero, risking his life for a kitty! I was so scared he’d fall, we’ll done 🙂
A real superman!😊 Thank you for reading! ☺
Always a pleasure 🙂
Awwee.. what a very kind and brave man. And very lucky kitten, too. 😀 I didn’t see that ball of fur coming though. Great twist! 🙂
A very lucky kitty indeed!☺ Thanks for reading!😊
It surely is! You’re most welcome. ❤️❤️❤️
A lovely touch of heroism!!!
Thank you so much for reading! Glad you liked it! 😊
Phew!! I held my breath all the way. Those cats know how to get up high and lost there!
Haha! They certainly do! Thanks for reading! 😊
There has to be little bit of crazy in every hero!
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