Tanka Challenge: Shattered

Posted on January 7, 2017 by

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Given up on life

Imbued with self-pity, weak

Tear stained pillow case

Struggling to stay positive

Please God, help me help myself

For Weekly Tanka Challenge

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Author: Ugly Aphrodite (Available on Amazon Kindle) Ah, the need to get your thoughts out there! Happy reading folks!
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5 Responses to Tanka Challenge: Shattered

  1. kiwinana says:
    January 7, 2017 at 1:12 am

    Thanks, those words sure make sense of the title, but very sad.
    All the best for 2017.

    Reply
  2. Jade M. Wong says:
    January 7, 2017 at 2:12 am

    Oh wow…the pleading, the desperation, it all comes through so well…in a heartbreaking way.

    Reply

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