Your tongue let loose
Bitter words, abuse
Wounding, scarring
Brutally devouring
Egos clashing
Both sides lashing
But sometimes silence
Is your best guidance
Inspired by the quotes of Imam Ali (a.s):
“Tongue is a beast, if it is let loose, it devours.”
“Surely silence can sometimes be the most eloquent reply.”
For The Daily Post’s Daily Prompt: Argument
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I love how the dialogue suggests an argument is ensuing, w/o it having to be said. Well done.
Thank you so much! Glad you liked it! 🙂
The poem is good and also the quote by Imam Ali. Bravo! I treated the prompt from the angle of argument in marriage: https://yoursuccessinspirer.com/2016/10/08/argument-in-marriage/
Thank you so much for reading! Glad you liked the quotes! Will check out yours!
That’s fine. Thank you!
Very well done…silence can be golden (unless it’s used to build a brick wall).
Very true, as with all actions, silence too needs to be used wisely! …Thank you!
Most welcome 🙂
A good poem. Silence is golden, as they say.
Thank you so much for reading! 🙂
Brilliant! Great rhythm and rhyme, and the quote at the end is a perfect fit.
Thank you so much for your wonderful comment!! I really appreciate it! 🙂