Tanka Challenge: By the Sea


Radiant rays stretch

The sun-kissed tide slowly swells

Water racing near

The soft foam tickles our feet

By the sea, just you and me

For Weekly Tanka Challenge


About swritings

Author: Ugly Aphrodite (Available on Amazon Kindle) Ah, the need to get your thoughts out there! Happy reading folks!
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10 Responses to Tanka Challenge: By the Sea

  1. kiwinana says:

    Nice one, just feels like summer is here, can’t wait for it here in NZ, sick of all the rain.
    Have a nice week and thanks for joining in on the weekly tanka challenge.

  2. jademwong says:

    Aww I love the feel and vibe of this poem. Breezy and fun 🙂

  3. I like this one, cozy and sentimental (just you and me) = I love this.

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