Word-High July: Takipsilim

july 12

Hues of crimson,ย fading light

Your hollow words filled the night

When you spurned me at the door

My sunsets wrecked forevermore


For Word-High July


About swritings

Author: Ugly Aphrodite (Available on Amazon Kindle) Ah, the need to get your thoughts out there! Happy reading folks!
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14 Responses to Word-High July: Takipsilim

  1. rosemawrites says:

    geeeeeez! you were able to give me goosebumps in four short line. Wow!!!

  2. Sanjay M Bhaskar says:

    Beautiful…. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

  3. bikurgurl says:

    Sad, lonely, and wonderfully written. It’s difficult not to like a verse that ends in Forevermore! Well-done ๐Ÿ™‚

  4. shaunkellett says:

    Wow. I loved this poem! It had a certain brutality to it.

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