TLT: Affliction


TLT week 15: lemons

A creature of bitterness, misery envelops

Preying upon the weak, souls facilely succumb

Only the brightness of hope extracts all acerbity

For Three Line Tales

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Author: Ugly Aphrodite (Available on Amazon Kindle) Ah, the need to get your thoughts out there! Happy reading folks!
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12 Responses to TLT: Affliction

  1. Sonya says:

    I like that your lines mention lemony features, but aren’t about lemons at all. Great stuff 🙂

  2. Patricia says:

    The brightness of hope…lovely and true.

  3. afairymind says:

    Very nicely done. 🙂 I love the last line!

  4. M Chaillot says:

    WOW, this is beyond amazing.

  5. mandibelle16 says:

    Yes. Hope can be very powerful, even against bitterness. Well written lines :).

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