3 Line Tales: Hindsight

Three Line Tales

Three Line Tales hosted by Sonya, week two

The bully smugly declared that she was too weak to take on the dare, her low self-esteem promptly making her comply.

She stumbled halfway across the bridge and the waves washed away her body, as they did the smirk from the bully’s face.

Years later he still awoke, sweating.

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24 Responses to 3 Line Tales: Hindsight

  1. mandibelle16 says:

    Scary three sentences. I suppose the bully deserves to hav nightmares, daring the girl to go across a dangerous bridge. But perhaps that event changed him,

  2. I don’t like bullies and I hope he changes his ways otherwise the nightmares will get worse :/

  3. jansenphoto says:

    An unexpected twist…I surely hope that she comes back to do more than haunt him…Well done!

  4. Deb says:

    So much detail in so few words. Brilliantly written.

  5. Sonya says:

    Oh dear, I hope she survived. But the bully got what he deserved. Great lines – thanks for joining in 🙂

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  7. Now, to put the bully on the bridge…

  8. Weezelle says:

    I really like how much you conveyed in so little. Well done.

  9. Lynn Love says:

    This is heart stopping stuff! A moments’ thoughtlessness and a lifetime of horror. An original take on the photo – great writing. 🙂

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